These eyes have seen so much,
Happeniess and sorrow.
Tired but content,
To live my final years.
Longing for the simplier life,
Of my long ago youth.
Back when my journey had just begun,
Before my first steps.
Then learning how to run,
And the values of life.
Falling in love,
Marrying my true.
Watching our children grow,
Teaching them the values,
We learned as kids.
Almost time for me to move on,
To a better place.
Join my friends,
Forever remembering my youth.
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Picture is the prompt:
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oldman_by_alexielsld
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 16 entries by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended May 9, 2008, 7 entries
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out standing...for through the eyes of the wise ones, wisdom flows...memories flow like sweet wine to remind of ones passing day...a little longing, and a few more smiles, then the journey to be with long past friends.....wonderful!!
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nice
nice thoughtful write for the prompt . . old memories bring fond thoughts to mind . . good title . . liked "Longing for the simplier life of my youth" and "Almost time for me to move on" . . good luck in the contest . .
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Thank you
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. It was a fun prompt to work with
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Lovely thoughts of what the picture brings to mind...a life lived anf loved, now coming to a close...no regreats just peace and comfort for what is to come...
well done...
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment. He looked like he had lived a complete life in the picture
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