Optical entities of unimaginable delights,
persuade and allure me to an
antithesis of opposing realities.
As I gaze into the wonders of
surreal skies painted in ebony
magnificence.
My starlite eyes sparkle
with the brilliance of tiny
specks of crystal light.
Illuminating the obscurity
within the corridors of my
endless ponderings.
As I transcend the terrestial
in the exploration of celestial
enlightenment.
After being stricken by heavenly
epiphanies that cast a spotlight
on the vast miracles of an infinite
universe.
A contest entry
- Butterflies Flutter By by whispernthedark.
675 points, ended May 17, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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wow this is a beautiful description of someone loking at the stars the word usage is wonderful... well deserving of the 3 clappy things
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i love looking at the stars!! it make you wonder if there really is something out there. its almost freaky beacouse you feel so small looking up, it makes you think how did all this really happen how can something become so beautiful?
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you so in love
i saw you put your money up so i dropped in and read your cotton soft feelings almost brought me tears
damn! lot of points to good luck
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Inspiration comes from the twinkling in the sky.
As we look up we wonder and always ask why.
I like it. Good Job. -
This really IS breathtaking. Such vivid imagrey is provoked from reading this, its such an insightful write, Awesome job.
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This is mystical and breathtaking! It was a vivid description of observations along with fantasy. BRAVO!!!!!!
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great descriptions! i like how you didnt come straight out and say you were penning this about space, but left the reader to imagine. thanks!
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