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Petal (Haiku)




One coral petal
Adrift the silver ocean
Ripped away from home





Author notes

Haiku inspired by the pretty dogwood blossoms ^.^ But (of course) I turned it into something darker.

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  • B Chandler
    May 16, 2008
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    I can't see how this is 'darker' when it isn't


  • GregTheWang
    April 29, 2008

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    Wow... this one's amazing, because it can be applied to many situations. Being just one little thing, floating on this vast sea, away from your dearest ones... I think you understand. Excellent write.