Your dramatic portrayals and acts
Have made your audience shed light tears
None compared to the one, who has cried the most
Not because of your story on stage,
--But the actions you have done in reality.
She is not a character from a script
To be abused at will,
Nor is she a puppet with strings
To be controlled and manipulated,
And when the lights go up and the stage dimmed
-- What you've said and done will not dissipate.
Your words still linger in her mind
Every promise and moment remains
The feelings that you left her with will not disappear
When the curtains close after your done
Remarkable what your sermon has done to a girl so strong,
For now she still stands upon your stage
-- Where you have finished your play
Leaving her in dismay.
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To my dear friend,
Who I'm afraid is lost.
But i hope that soon,
She will be found.
-angi terese
A contest entry
- give me da goodz by exithere.
600 points, ended May 8, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This only has one gold trophy. I said one gold and one if another trophy. I only see one trophy, you will be DQ.
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ohhhhh alright i read wrong :/
i thought it just needed one gold at least...
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i love you
angii you are amazing. not only is this a rly good poem but yeah. i love you. thank you so much....good luck in contest -
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if only i were still amazing in your eyes...
only time will tell...
...i will still, always be here; waiting.
-angi terese -
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...sorry for everything i just got upset that u started to yell at me...i dunno...i just need alot of time to think about whats going on
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i only yelled because i was really insulted val. that you were "avoiding" me based off of the fact that i care about you. yeah amy and i might be nagging pain in the butts, but thats what people who love you do!
-sigh- i give up. whenever you feel that your fine again, im around.
but im not going to force myself upon someone who doesnt appreciate that im trying to look after them... -
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i dunno... i just didn't want to deal with it...and i dunno i just didnt want to be yelled at any more and i dunno i just cant explain it and im just...these couple of days have been rough...ill be back eventually
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