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Chilly

sun shining

with a cool breeze

deception

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  • Perception
    May 4, 2008
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    Oh.. Very interesting haiku... Very different... kinda darker...
    But a very good haiku!


  • MagicLady silver member
    April 30, 2008

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    I like this haiku. These are the days of April and May. The look of the clear skies and bright sunshine, sure is "deception"

    Cheryl


  • Jbthemilker
    April 29, 2008

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    Today the weather is just right for such a poem. It is cool, yet we have bright sun shine. the deception is that these days like today are very few and far between here in Western Maryland. It will soon be too hot to work outside.


  • PoeticAlien gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    ha,
    TRUTH!
    nicely done.


  • Kelli Marie
    April 29, 2008

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    I know what you mean. Looking out the window to that nice bright sun, then go out to that chilly wind. Very well written. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli

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