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Frienship as a House

To know you is to live within
The comfort of a home
With fire casting warmth and light
Here always I’m welcomed

I brush my shoes out on the stoop
I’m careful of my tread
I try my best to always treat
You with the most respect

For once you track the dirt inside
It never does come out
And here I’d always like the chance
To be allowed come back

Author notes

Done in ballad meter as an assignment. Three stanzas, four lines each, alternating tetrameter and trimeter.

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