Creepy
Kitty
kissing
my
bicycle
and
purring
in
pleasure
.
.
.
weirdo.
Author notes
"My Story"
written for a contest. 10 words only.
Picture is of my cat Lex who seems obsessed with the bike we are storing in the kitchen...he loves to rub his face all over it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Live At 10 With Your Finger Tips by theredcatjazzoflove.
850 points, ended April 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments? Constructive criticisms? Is the rhyme working? Does the last stanza fit? The last line?
Comments
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aww a cute and simple short piece with a friendly contradicting ending.
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LOL! This made me laugh. Seriously. I love it! The picture and the poem is amazing.
The only thing I would actually tell you is that the entire poem is in the preview box... so I knew what the poem was before I clicked on it. I could read the funny part, but it wasn't in the form that you used, so it wasn't as good.
I don't even know if that made sense... but basically, change the preview box so I can't read it before hand.
Good job!
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oh wow I can't believe I did that! Thanks for pointing it out, I've gone back and fixed it so only the first two words are in the preview. Thank you again! ^_^
-Laura
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Oh, he has a crush on your bike!! This is so adorable.
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This is a great poem. I especially like the ending--something I didn't expect! Good luck in the contest!
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cats are grand things
and yours is sweet
liked this poem
as it made me smile
thank you and
best wishes
in this contest
Riftkin
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cute.......cats can be weird. but I sure love them. and look your's gave you these ten words......good luck in the contest.
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Cute!
Crazy Kitty Cute! Best wishes in this contest.
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Cute. The pictures of the black and white cats (toxado cat) looks like my black and white cat named Maggie.
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