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Haiku - Anomalies

Missing image

Through bursting buds peep
Spring's first blooms, to fey beauty
doomed slaves stay asleep

 

 

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Slave asleep
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  • icebear
    August 12
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    excellent

    The seeds of tomorrow need today's love.


  • michichoeret
    July 28
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    very cool

    nice write and great pictures

    the last line absolutely floored me


  • Kelli Marie
    April 29
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    your first to lines are capitalized and shouldnt be...

  • Kelli Marie
    April 29

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    This is a very nicely crafted haiku. You did a real nice job. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli