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How?

How am I supposed to breathe?
You take my breath away!
How am I supposed to speak
When I'm speechless anyway?

How am I supposed to hear?
Only your words come through.
How am I supposed to tell?
They'd not believe it's true.

How am I supposed to see?
Without you, my world's gray!
How am I supposed to learn
When you're in my mind all day?

How am I supposed to sing,
When you have got my voice?
How am I supposed to leave
If I don't like that choice?

How am I supposed to dream?
You are my fantasy.
How am I supposed to sleep,
Wishing you're with me?

How am I supposed to live
If you're not by my side?
How am I supposed to stand
If with you I collide?

How am I supposed to walk,
When with you I would sit?
How am I supposed to say
What I cannot admit?

How am I supposed to hold
Your hand if you're not there?
How am I supposed to laugh
If you're not being fair?

How am I supposed to wish
If you're my heart's desire?
And how am I supposed to love?
You've set my world on fire.

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For the first time in weeks... inspiration.

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  • Dawn Angel
    April 29, 2008

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    congratulations on the inspiration. Lovely write as always sorry I haven't been on lately, but I see you've continued to create masterpieces.


  • Quill Bill
    April 29, 2008
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    well done it might be a tad long with the repertion but it's good

  • summore
    April 29, 2008

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    How long will questions go unanswered? How long can one tread water before a lifesaver is sent? **You take my breath away!**
    Do what feels good . Try it, you may like it ~Interesting conclusion **You've set my world on fire**