Let's just say there was something
about this twilight sky
that made you want to pull me closer,
release the sigh
that fills your walls,
our fingers, interlaced,
kiss the stars from my eyes
and let your heart love me.
Just blame it on the moon.
♥♥
A contest entry
- ~* Let Love In *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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By all means! Blame it on the one-eyed orb. Beautiful, romantic. Just lovely!
ten
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*Sigh* Oh wow, straight forward and to the very point of it all. A lovely piece of amorous reflections and heart's desire. Great write!
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Woo Hoo bff,,,
way to go!! you are going to need to dust off that virtual mantel to make more room!!
Beautiful and amazing as always..
Congratulations on your award
Jazzy
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Blame It On The Moon~
This piece tugged at Spirit and when I first read it
for some reason I instantly got the words:
River Phoenix...
seeing kayaking...
I'm trying to write this so it makes sense
also seeing word: Macys...and the Macys store
Martha Stewart...her products...
it feels like...decorating and seeing a bedroom...
for some reason...
getting reference to: Mother's Day
and words; will be hard...
Seeing: new car...reference to that....
Nights on Broadway...
also seeing David Hasselhoff for some reason
Wonderful images to touch deep
These lines grabbed and pulled~
release the sigh
that fills your walls,:
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Good company, fine wine and a moonlit night, what more could one want ..
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So very wonderfully and beautifully written this is...
That moon can just be something else, isn't that right?
Wishing you the very best of luck in this contest!
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Lmao
Love it. I love how you cna blame the moon for this simplistic beaut ymasterfully penned poem you have written here. I also love the over all concept and portrayal you dealt with through out this. any ways excellent write & keep it up
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