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Mariage ŕ la Modem – HTML - How The Men Lie !

‘Mariage ŕ la Modem’ 



ADSL  or  Ask Divorce Suit Later

DIAL UP or LAID Down


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HTML : Hyper Text Mark up Language 

 

Hints To Measure Life or How The Men Lie ! 


J's 7 years of Internet Woman

All the world's a screen - we mean all men and women merely payers,
they have their passwords and their logins pat,
and when online each plays so many parts,
their contActs spanning seven stages  :

Help      Through  Many   Lists
Host      To          My        Leisure 

Here     To          Make    Love 
Heaven Talks      Many    Languages 
Hooked Through Mirage Links 
How      The        Men     Lie 
Hope     Time     Morale  Lost 

 

Author notes

Jacques Seven Ages of Man - William Shakespeare


pic Internet Dating
http://www.flickr.com/photos/jazziphoto/2240490975/

pic 2
http://www.flickr.com/photos/abcflirt/2250681904/

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  • Metaphorist
    June 1
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    Haha. Great anagrams. So creative. Thanks for entering.
  • carole21
    May 14
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    original and different write . . liked the pictures as well . .

  • alco
    May 14

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    Wow. This is so very true. My sister was always on dating sites, she visited several. She would read pages upon pages of prospective men she would want to have contact with. She never met anyone she clicked with. A few months ago, she met a man who works in the apartment complex she lives in, and they really hit it off and began dating. My sis is 52yrs old, and her manfriend is 27yrs old. I was a bit shocked to find that out, but only wish them well.
    I would rather meet a man in person, and if we click, we do; if we don't, we don't. I don't think I could bring myself to choose a man based on a profile pic and what they say is the truth about who they are.
    This is really a powerful message you have sent out here, and I applaud you for speaking the truth.
    ~Monica

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  • libithina
    May 14

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    Very cleverly and uniquely done and so insightful
    truly a new age s

  • frownsnfreckles
    May 7

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    oh so very true!!!! LOL
    loved the 'hooked through mirage link'
    I think once bitten for me will do!

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  • kira1115
    April 29

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    Hilarious, yet slightly disturbing. My mom met several of her husbands on line, and they did not work out.

  • whits end silver member
    April 29
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    This is funny, yet disturbing, I love it! Great job on your intelligence and uniqueness!!!


  • writonthebody
    April 29

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    i think this is a really interesting concept- and one that could be fleshed out with a bit more thought. For instance I'm not sure the flow of this version is smooth enough to ellicit the response you want from the reader. While the images are really provocative, they almost feel like interruptions rather than additions to your 'point'. I wouldn't suggest cutting them out altogether, but perhaps you could try rearranging them? Maybe to the end of the piece? or just at the beginning as a sort of 'appetizer' to your poem?

    Not sure really, I just feel that the idea is so complex and really poignant that it deserves to be presented in the best way possible.

    Cheers for a new perspective, and good luck.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    April 29

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    LOL! both my brother and mother are with people they met on the internet. he for over six years and she is getting married may 30th. they are not all bad apples. thank you for sharing this with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

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  • catie052 gold member
    April 29
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    very clever

  • Margaret Denham
    April 29

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    Very witty and also very true. There are many players out there in the cyber jungle.

    Thank you for sharing.

    Margaret

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    April 29

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    i thought this was interesting and clever i couldn't resist the title very witty take on HTML too!
    years ago i met many men on the internet and even met a few in real life. they were all good people. maybe i was lucky or maybe i was smart it got so that i could spot the liars/losers real quick.
    this was fun and thanks for sharing

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