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RED... [em] (Senryu)

Inner problems told
Red "democrats" speaking free
Silenced "fascist" claims

Author notes

Today I had to watch a "reunion" where the president of a students' organization was forced to resign by the extremist leaders of each one of the faculties. While the leaders had all the time and freedom to speak, being respected by the counterparts, they (And the crowd) had literally forced the opposite parts to resign, without a chance to justify their mistakes.

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  • MysteriousWhisper
    August 2

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    very interesting political haiku or senryu. i am not really sure. i like the background as well great job and good luck in the contest!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 1, 2008
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    Congrats on the Goldlol and on the masterpiece itselflol

  • femurlee
    April 30, 2008
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    Bravo!

    Your sentiments are well received! Peace.