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Introspection



I fall to my knees,
Cowering from the sharp pain
Of my own wisdom.




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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 7, 2008

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    hehehehehehehe
    ...not something we would want to do be doing i think, but a great little write Mark, congrat's on the HM



    Cin


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 1, 2008

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    This is really something, I can't define it at the moment but I know its in there hahahahaha and congrats on your befitting trophy hahahaha


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    Ahh sounds like a realisation that doesn't want to be found.... at least that's what it says to me lol.

    A lot said in a few words!

  • aaaaaaaa
    April 29, 2008

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    yeah I can totally relate to this. when I understand what my faults are but I'm just not strong or brave enough to face them. then it brings me into a whirlpool or guilt, doubt, and self-hate. good powerful piece here.