fragment

eras reina de fragmentos y parches
viviendo en la soledad sin vida
de mis sueños

(you were queen of shreds and patches
living only in the lifeless solitude
of dreams)

Author notes

‘tis a shitty exercise in writing about prompts that don’t inspire me. both the spanish original & english translation have fifteen words.

(thanks for the line, shakespeare!)

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  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    May 11
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    Ew! You only got a booger? Damn contest holders. I thought this was brilliant and beautiful and awesome. You rock muchoooo (I know spanish too! yeah right )
    Jeanette*~


  • phoenixonfire
    May 4
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    That is indeed very unique and splendid! I love the refrence to queen of shreds and patches! Great work..

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri