eras reina de fragmentos y parches
viviendo en la soledad sin vida
de mis sueños
(you were queen of shreds and patches
living only in the lifeless solitude
of dreams)
Author notes
‘tis a shitty exercise in writing about prompts that don’t inspire me. both the spanish original & english translation have fifteen words.
(thanks for the line, shakespeare!)
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 4, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i love criticism.
Comments
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em..i speak english soz
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Ew! You only got a booger? Damn contest holders.
I thought this was brilliant and beautiful and awesome. You rock muchoooo 
(I know spanish too! yeah right ) 
Jeanette*~
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That is indeed very unique and splendid! I love the refrence to queen of shreds and patches! Great work..
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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