Your kisses taste like wine.
Your love is so divine.
Author notes
"My Story"
A contest entry
- Live At 10 With Your Finger Tips by theredcatjazzoflove.
850 points, ended April 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your first empression?
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beautiful poem... love it!
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Thank you for the nice comment.
Crafty
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Aw, so sweet. I love the analogy.
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Thank you my friend for the sweet comment.
Hugs
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this was a very nice innocent sweet ten word propmt thanks hon for entering my contest you did a very great job
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Thank You for the nice comments.
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the flow and rhyme
for this is in time
your words complete
not take away from it
best of luck
Riftkin
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Thank you riftkin for your kind words.
crafty
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