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Washing Dishes....................

Wishing for

              your love

                        in this sink

                                    full of bubbles

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my story

daydreaming makes the chore easier.............

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  • Riftkin gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    sink of bubbles
    to wash life's cares away
    now that is something
    worthy of ten words
    and hours of daydreaming

    Riftkin


  • Harlequin Bunny
    April 29, 2008

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    haha - I'm sorry about the mixup - I surf the "newest poems" list, I guess I clicked on it too quickly! I see you switched the location of some words around - it reads just as well this way, and seems to flow a little smoother - good decision!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    I Like This!

    Beautiful and makes me wish to jumb in there, but I'd have to be a-lot smaller.. LOL. A lot. Thanks for sharing, and all the best to ya.

    -Timothy