Hearts together
bodies alone
longing him
needful time
united souls
Seeking strength
relearning trust
mind spinning
tales told
breath in
breath out
Far away
words spoken
silent whispers
loves distant
holding tight
lifelines rope
One day
happiness lives
then alone
depression mummers
escape to sleep
walking dreams
having faith
A contest entry
- Long Distance Love by SomeonesToySoldier.
500 points, ended May 9, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I know the feeling. Long distance love can be torment at times. Good luck in contest.
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Very good. A unique writing style that I've yet to see in my contest so far. You have described the feeling of being in a long distance relationship well and the photo really compliments the poem seeing as its usually long roads seperating you from the ones you love. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck.
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Lisa, this is so well said, the challenges of long distant love, it can be so hard at times. This is so sad yet also hopeful.
Good luck in this contest, not that you need luck, this is beautiful.
blessings, love, and
sss,
Michelle
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This is bitter-sweet Sis! Such a vivid description of this type of relationship...best of luck in the contest Hun!
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