Indescribably delicious is your fine-lined love,
gliding and sliding like soft flowing, silky snow.
Sensual pleasant intensity beckons complexity,
yet, lets simple simplicity still steal the show.
Words to describe you love, doesn't come easy,
you make the world so flow as to be sugar-sweet.
I keep your photo close, love you the uttermost.
All things considering you are so preciously neat.
Dot all my I(s) for me, I'll spot all your T(s),
you are my gentle rain, fast falling down on me.
Look at this face of mine, such a fine misty glow.
All from your care of me, your love's quiet ability.
Swooshing and swashing, flowing and glowing,
I am entranced by you, willingly dazed I tend to be.
No one can shine as bright, through all my nights,
I'm loving you more and more, most intrinsically.
A contest entry
- It must be love, love, love...! by Li snuffles.
500 points, ended May 13, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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THis was rally nice i love the rhyme scheme and the alliteration
your piece just had a 'flow' to it
good luck in my contest, this was a fantastic read...xxx -
lovely piece with good flow and rhyme...good use of language and lots of love, love, love-well done.
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Thanks Iggy, I have got to slow the pace, hahaha my words are becoming repetitive I think
lol
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a good piece, sugar-sweet with the flow and peppermint rhyme that dances love down the page with grace an glee.
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hahaha what a cute review hahaahaha thankslol
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A wonderful poem on love. Very discriptive with metephors and imagery. Romantic in its essence.
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Thanks Z, this is my romantical side on displaylol
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