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Natural Intoxication

 

Natural intoxication, so pleasant to the mind.

Enhances all the senses, this fragrant find.

 

No need for ingestion, the scent is enough.

No needles to insert, or smoke fumes to puff.

 

Life is all the stimulation that you need,

all others lead to destruction and greed.

 

Take time to appreciate what nature offers you.

It's the best thing for yourself you can do. 

 

Natural intoxication provided for free.

Bounty from the earth, a beautiful potpourri.

 

Author notes

This interpretation for those without allergies!

A) The pic above, don't know who to credit unfortunately!
http://00velvet00dreams00.deviantart.com/art/into-the-sky-63279990
Into The Sky, by 00velvet00dreams00 on DeviantArt.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    May 13, 2008

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    yeah, i liked the rhyming and i liked how you focused on the fact the flower had a great smell and that was all you needed. good luck and thanks for entering.


  • penman gold member
    May 1, 2008
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    Excellent

    What an amazing creation for the picture. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    Opening one's eyes & soul to all things natural, is such a wonderful gift to have. My favorite lines:
    "Life is all the stimulation that you need,
    all others lead to destruction and greed."
    I really enjoyed ready this. Thank you. Juls


  • DarkHunter
    April 29, 2008

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    CRAZY CAT best of luck in the contest Catnip


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    This is a picture I often seen with my little cat Smokey! 's Such sweet and wonderful fragrances can be found all around us in nature especially in the spring time.

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