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Mouse Trap

Briers 
bound her wrist

my lion
pushed into her fur










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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    Gulp!! What to say again.. what to say????

    Very saucy! Love it!


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    oh now that is such a great
    use of ten words to bring
    the heat up and make one roar....

    blessing to you sweet friend

    Riftkin


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 29, 2008
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    ROOOOAAAARR!!! well done in passionate's brevity xxxxx many blessings always xxx