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Pauper


When events of past unfold
Of character enriched we’re foretold
When in truth many a pauper so

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  • femurlee
    April 30, 2008
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    I like your way of thinking about about the "character enriched". Good luck in the contest. A traditional senryu has 5-7-5 syllables per line. Peace.