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The City in Spring

Parade down white streets,
Through blankets of brief spring snow…
In shorts and sandals


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I don't quite get people who dress based on the date on the calendar, rather than the weather outside.

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  • BellaD
    February 1

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    Yes, I've often wondered about this myself. Is it just wishful thinking, as in "if we dress like it's warm, it will be warm"?
    Nice job with this concise piece.


  • acari27 gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    im with you, whats wrong with these people...?- I mean Im not a fan of capital punishment but ...something needs to be done...

    funny

  • femurlee
    April 30, 2008

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    Cool Point

    Your sentiments are well taken. I don't dress for the season just the way I like. Good luck in the contest. Peace.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 29, 2008
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    I like the wittiness in this one-good luck in the contestlol


  • sheltered
    April 29, 2008
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    Excellent. I saw a person in shorts about a month ago... lol... and I am from Canada.


  • Undetectable
    April 29, 2008

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    I love it when people adhere to the traditional form without destroying the meaning or what they want to say. Great write! Good luck in the contest. I honestly think this deserves placement no less than Gold.

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