many know of those
with the unbeating heart
many fewer know though
those who play the part
many dream of life
that will never end
few will know the pain
of a heart that can never mend
many wish to be
embraced by the shadow
fewer know of the
pain of the eternal struggle
many want to be
in love with the one
fewer though know the pain
of when their motal one's time has come
many of you wish
to be one who lays apart
but fewer of you know
the pain of the unbeating heart
Author notes
i had trouble coming up with a solid idea with this one, so this was the best i could pull out at the moment
Please tell me what you think
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wooow...that was sooooo kool, that was awesomeeee...keep writing dude..
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hey james! this is a nice write. I enjoyed letting your poem wash the truth of life over me.Thanks for sharing. It is a lovely work, very honest and true.
Cheers!!!
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i like the ending, how it ties in w/the beginning as well as the rest of the poem
"but fewer of you know
the pain of the unbeating heart" -
cool
for a spur of the moment, it's cool.
Good luck.
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its good im sure youll do well in the contest
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