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Crawl

Chained to doubts and fear
again I crawl inside myself

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my story

In a list

A contest entry

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    swear this is definately gorgeous! you blew me away was this straight from the top i think you did a great excellent job as you took on my propmt


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    This is very dark and so honestly displayed! best of luck in the contest!!!


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    slighty dark
    but well worded.

    fear sends us
    deep into ourselves

    best of luck to you
    in this contest

    Riftkin