Does it matter, when its all said and done.
Does it matter, when i find the fucking gun.
Does it matter, as they stumble upon my body
Does it matter, to you, to me, or to anyone.
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short but powerfull hun....great write..keep it up xx
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thats so sad but cheer up life gets better at least thats what ive found. dont give up
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huh
life geys ruff and thats the thing most people think about i have before -
wow. for such a short poem... that right there is deathly
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
For a short little piece, you're knocking some big meanings around. Definitely powerful.
But I must say, only YOU can determine if it matters.
Keep on expressing through writing.
Storm
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very good :D
it is short simple and to the point.....i really like it.
well keep on writing bro you got talent.
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a very good poem
I really like this poem. It's very well written, a constant flow of emotions with each line.
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its not a bad write actually, its perfect.. simple and honest... like the concrete way you've come out to your hidden feeling...
wonderful job!
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Wow this is a good write. Short and to the point. I like it. It's one of the best short one's i've read.
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good.....
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dang alot of emtion
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this is so simple but the meaning in it so of large... i think thats the way to put it i love how you start each line with the same phrase and also use the phrase as the title good work
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i love this...
it reminds me of sumthing i would write
it relates to me and it's got so much
intensity in so few of words..
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ohhhhh nice such intensity, and very well written.
'does it matter' it makes you think well done.
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