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Sounded So Sweet

"I miss you I miss your pretty face
when are we gonna meet"
and I replied
"Another man I have already and he
loves me"

he walked passed with the
air

and
I cried that day in my room
not because of me
but because he sounded so
genuine...



and because of me





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  • monstruo
    May 1, 2008
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    Sweet talk is just that; talk. But you still have to wonder 'what if?' right? Good poem.


  • kennethlaney
    April 30, 2008

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    Nice

    Tend to make you think, "What If" but I guess you can't run off with all that talk sweet to you. Hope you've been well.
    "BOO"


  • blakdiamone
    April 29, 2008

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    Wonder who this was about? Hmmmmm, I wonder I wonder, but yea, I liked it, I understood it, but from what I remember you asking ME when we were gonna meet lol.