look into my eyes and read me like a book
Author notes
my story
A contest entry
- Live At 10 With Your Finger Tips by theredcatjazzoflove.
850 points, ended April 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
well...?
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this poem says so much like many other short poems you write, i like the way you are telling them to read you like a book, keep up the great writing, -Amy
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awww thank you, im really glad u like my work.
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To search ones soul
the eyes are the gateway,
to be read like a book,
all they have to do
is to take one single look.
Nice poem here
best of luck to you
Riftkin
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i love eyes. mine give me away everytime lol and thanks
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Excellent
Beautiful take on this prompt. You write so well and from the soul. Best of luck in this contest.
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thank you
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10 good words yay!!! lol =)
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thanks lol
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