Rain holds back mind spin
touch coming in
waiting...
arrival -
Author notes
"My Story"
A contest entry
- Live At 10 With Your Finger Tips by theredcatjazzoflove.
850 points, ended April 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow! you nailed it dill i think you did a very nice job on penning your piece here i am so impressed with your funk here you are on point with this
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interesting choice of words to
form your poem here.
best of luck to you
Riftkin
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A very interesting poem. It seems to curl back on itself.
~ Joyce
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Brilliant 10 words... say so much! I could definitely relate to this piece.. the waiting...
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wow
this is a pretty cool little 'mind trick', like this one alot my friend! lots of luck in the contest.
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