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One Day...

One day
we
ahall
all
become
that
which
is wished
…

© Jonathan Wikkins April 29, 2008
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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    this is so very much so true and very much so a deep ten word piece that honestly touch me! i want to thank you so very much for entering i like this mike


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    This is true, and I wish you
    all the best in this contest.

    Riftkin


  • Sprite silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    So many wishes so little time...or words as it were. Actually, I see this as religious in nature. I believe that one day (when I die) I will be everything I wished for. A thought provoking poem

    ~ Joyce


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    Excellent!

    A very wonderfully inscribed piece.
    All the best to ya poet! Peace~

    -Timothy


    • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
      April 29, 2008

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      i came back here to reply to yur comment, and saw i didn't date my piece! lol...
      i forgot to change my auto text!

      thanks for the comment!

      mike


  • sanity
    April 29, 2008

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    hmmmmm.. whatever that will be i guess... and I'm thinking maybe at peace.. and if that is your thinking then this is just an amazing piece hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 29, 2008
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    Fair enough!!!
    xxx Hilly

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