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i thought i could fight/for you-for us

this is for you
this is for us
my torture
my bliss

i thought that i could fight
for the both of us
but you'd never let me
you wouldn't
you couldn't
you weren't strong enough
but that's okay cause i am
so hear it

this is for you
this is for us
my torture
my bliss

every letter
every story
we made
you wrote
never finished

my turn
to write
for us
and them
how you made them
real
my turn

but no not like you
never like you

i'll make them

i'll make them

but they'll just be
stories

like you

you're
not real
not to me
to anyone
not anymore

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    this is rather haunting
    these are good lines...
    'every letter
    every story
    we made
    you wrote
    never finished'

    thank you for entering and good luck
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