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Love letters in spring

Cherry blossom snow of softest pink
Adds magic to a street in any town
An illustration sketched in pen and ink
As further petals tumble gently down

The springtime grass has disappeared from view
Awkward branches strip away their dress
The sketch you drew shows London fresh and new
While carpeted with such a pretty mess

When all the pink has settled from the trees
The buds of leaves can start to change the scene
The birds will sing of coming summer ease
While magic pink transforms to normal green

On cherry blossom days you wrote to me
To tell me of the world that I should see

Author notes

I love the pink snow!

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  • At the moment I live in a pink and white world and it is beautiful. Your poem does nature justice and your final couplet brings the human touch to this tribute to nature.

    All the best in the contest...

    Sue
    xx


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 29
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    Not bad.


  • Playjazz66 silver member
    April 29

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    Oh, I grew up in the Washington D.C. area with the cherry blossoms and now am surrounded by trees covered by pink and white each spring.

    Yes, this is spring! Good luck in the contest

    Jim


  • NeonRose silver member
    April 29

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    Wonderful! I am so familiar with this, as I have flowering pears in my yard, and we get "snow" every spring! I truly enjoyed this write to the upmost! Best of luck, and thank you for your entry.