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"Brief Encounter"

Missing image
Beautiful Eyes
Emotions Arise

Pulsating Hips
Sensual Lips

Introduction
Total Seduction

Proposition
No Inhibition

My Plight
Transvestite




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  • toomysterious
    September 30, 2008
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    There you go again.


  • lostangel07
    August 8, 2008

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    Loved it, well written, cheeky and interesting. I like how you have used language and vocab in this. Great write


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    thats how long i grinned because it had a great impact on my imagination great job


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    Oh my gosh, this made me laugh hard when I got to the end! This is an excellently written piece! With much regret, though, I will have to remove it from my contest, as it has already won a gold trophy. Please feel more than welcome to enter another though. Thanks for entering!


  • Pollycheck
    May 18, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a well written peom with a great twist in the end of it. It caught me completely by surprise.


  • mystic-angel gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Ha ha! This is great. A brilliant take on the quote. Well done. Thanks for your entry. Good luck!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    lmao.............. Hehe I was getting into it too... You sneak.. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Shahrazad
    May 5, 2008

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    LOLOLOL! wonderful twist with the last line! Made me smile. Fun poem... vivid imagery. I really like where you went with the word limitation.

    Thanks for the read and the laugh!


  • Pearl-1
    May 4, 2008
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    this is so funny..you should have won somethink..xxx


  • eoz
    April 30, 2008
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    LoL


  • penman gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    Excellent

    So very well done. Humor at its best. Good luck in the contest


  • jcat gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    ROFLMFAO........Brilliant as usual!!!! This has got to be a winner!!! Best of luck!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    LMAO... you kill me!!

    Simply brilliant!!


  • In Too Deep1
    April 29, 2008
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    Lol.. great penning and sharp wit. An enjoyable satirical read. best wishes in the comp


  • creationsfromheart
    April 29, 2008
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    LOL ya nutter butter! LMao I thought this was going to be another love write to a past love lmao


  • daviscth silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    LOL!! You sure made awesome use of your 20 words sweetie. I just love this!! Good luck in the contest.


  • malmadre gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    I had no idea where this one was leading, thanks for making me laugh


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    Oh you have done it again !
    Never as I started reading this did I ever image the twist at the end.
    Brought a smile to my face
    Nice sensual write
    Julie


  • MysticalRayne
    April 29, 2008

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    Omg ~ I was thinking ok sexy picture wonderful write and then BAM ~ great job and very funny ~ best of luck in the contest


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    Bad bad someone shield my eyes lol. Nice write Deary Good luck with this. Transvestite ehhhhhh lol.


  • Lotus-Mama
    April 29, 2008

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    Very well chosen 17 words! Ooh la la... ha ha ha! Love the surprise at the end! Good luck in the contest!!

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