So they say…
If you listen,
very closely…
When the sun sets,
upon the sea…
You can hear the
shhhhhhhh…
As it first touches the water…
I’ve heard it….
Have you?
© Jonathan Wikkins April 29, 2008
All Rights Reserved
Author notes
Picture credit:
sunset by Ciero from deviant art
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie - 20/10 by buffsab99.
750 points, ended April 30, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very nice i liked it. The pic set's it up nicely too..great job..
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very simple but very beautiful
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Excellent
Excellent job on this. It was very tough contest to judge. Congrats on HM. Keep writing you have great talent -
excellent~
Very soothing...
Really enjoyed the read and like the pic to
Best of luck in the contest...
Hugs
Susan~~~
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susan!
been a long time!
thanks for the read and comment!
mike
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Beautiful
Beautiful take on this prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful write JW...very sensitive and just ooooh...I'm there!
Good luck with this one !
xxx Hilly
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thanks for your comment!
sometimes a pic just 'speaks' to you... and the words just blindside ya... like this one...
mike`
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I love the sounds of the water they are so tranquil and relaxing ~ calming that we all need at one time or another ~ great write and best of luck in the contest
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thanks for the read and comment!
just another blindside!
mike
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Beautiful my friend
I have heard the sound, music to my ears, so soft among the waves that lap against the shore.
Thank you for bringing the beauty of nature to my screen
Julie
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thank you for the read and comment!
this one just blindsided me when i saw the pic
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actually yes i have heard it... this is beautiful.... You knew i'd like it didn't you..... it has a wow factor and I don't say wow to much I can assure you... thanx for sharing... hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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sometimes you see a picture and a piece just blindsides you, like this one
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this is good mikwe and very sensual and romantic you took on this propmt very well good luck in the contest
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Beautiful! I could hear it now!
Very nice! Good Luck in the contest!!
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