A white pecorino moon
watches the sun
smile away the morning mist,
to reveal
red roofs of the valley village.
A contest entry
- Contest of the Shorts! by Shahrazad.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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you did draw a really great image with jsut a few words.... this poem reminded me of Leonardo's "Study of a Tuscan Landscape"...... but you added color. Lovely images.
Thanks for entering the contest! -
An abundance of imagery in a minimum of words--
Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!





