On cracked lip of horizon gasping its last goodnight
like an elder knowing frustration of stopped-up ears
sinking to sleep with worry of generations
on her yellow-eyed last glimpse
How we cause them suffering;
this stomach-sink sunset
and first woman
who wishes we would change
and reflect pink promises
Author notes
jpg = sunset by Ciero from deviant art
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You are so amazing
"this stomach-sink sunset
and first woman
who wishes we would change
and reflect pink promises"
Sigh....that last line really gets me
Lynda
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Excellent
Excellent take on this prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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