As your lips dance across my skin
your eyes meet with mine
each breath you take
whispers my name
Deep inside I feel your love
as you intrigue me
capturing me in your mind
You are perfect
do not let me go
hold my hand and
I'll hold your heart
Truth burns inside me
wrapped in your body
I lose control
This isn't a game being played
but I’m safe in your arms
so please don't move
I'm so in love with you
and I'm not letting go
In a list
A contest entry
- It must be love, love, love...! by Li snuffles.
500 points, ended May 13, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It must be love,this is so full of loveand longing. I hopeshe knows how much you love her.
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this poem is just beautiful, and the words radiate a very happy positive warm feeling across the page. you have such a great talent for writing it amazes me.. makes me realize I have a long way to go with my poetry..
good luck in the contest
kat
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The rhme scheme in this is incredible.. i really enjoyed reading this and th eimage goes well with your message of love
hold my hand and
I'll hold your heart
-> i loved those lines
thank you for entering and good luck in my contest -
Wow!
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