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Dark Eyes

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Scheming sister knows
how a wicked lie grows,
better watch your back
these dark eyes attack,
protective heart is black.



















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  • Shahrazad
    May 6, 2008

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    I loved how dark this was... having sisters of my own, i can relate to this. I love the picture too- it really fit with the poem (or perhaps it even prompted the poem)

    I really enjoyed reading this- Thanks for the read!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 29, 2008
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    Good flow of the rhyming verse--Intense & Dark!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    wow, dark write there...

    goodluck in the contest!
    i think it's a winner!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins