Speaks to me in rhythm and rhyme
It speaks to me all the time
The smooth sound of the melody
The beautiful sound surrounds me
The lead guitar that gently screams
Always going to the extremes
The drum beating the tempo loud
The bass playing harmony to show it's proud
The lyrics to the song start to unfold
If the music is too loud, you're too old
Author notes
something i come up with in 5 minutes, kind of corny, but ur choice, i can't express the way i feel through words, only with music
A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended May 10, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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yeah, i really like the title, it really caught my eye, and the poem is really good too, mentioning everything included in the song. i can't believe you came up with this in 5 minutes! and i don't think it's corny. good luck and thanks for entering
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cool
for something u didnt think was good u did an awesome job. I love it kels. Waiting for more.
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Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~Berthold Auerbach
The only line I don't like is the last one.
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