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Stitched But Still Torn

Millenniums

of

love

stitched

to

tattered

shoulders

ripped

and

defiled

by

the

heartbreak

of

  you 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 4, 2008
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    I like how love repairs the heartbreak - well said.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    May 4, 2008

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    That is really neat! So simple yet ppl can relate to the misery with so much emotions! I like this!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri


  • LadyUnique silver member
    April 30, 2008

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    amazing how a few simple words can express so much and you've done a good job doing that
    thank you for entering and good luck


  • KayJay
    April 29, 2008

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    Beautifully done and a wonderful take on the prompt! It's wonderful to see how you're growing each day! Keep up the great work!
    K