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rotten vascular organ


heart gone bad

heart on sleeve
literally

heart in throat
lyrically

heart cut up
Figuratively

Author notes

PICTURE PROMPT 15 WORDS: AN: heart on sleeve... not me... strapped up somewhere hidden from sight...

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Like your setup literally, lyrically and figuratively, indeed.
    Well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    May 4, 2008

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    This is so different and the way its worded i am impressed!!! I like the way it goes! Great work!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri


  • BehindTheShadow
    April 29, 2008
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    You go girl!!! I like the way you wrote this.