Wind blows blossomless
Grey dreams fading in the mists
Silent is my pond
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I thought this was rather a nice little haiku - indeed it was excellent - I shall get my little clapometer out and give you a triple dose of the clap.
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sensei
must be nice / my pond is muddied.
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a contender !
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Oh.... This is like... an inner look at a human soul.. Very subtle... very calm...
I like it...
and thanks for sharing
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very solitary, serene feeling in this haiku
tanka:
buds grow in secret places
unseen, life gathers new strength -
Tanka:
a drop of water falling
ripples throughout memory
This haiku is very thought provoking. It doesn't let out too much information and leaves you wanting to know more. Great imagery too ^.^
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Thanks, that's exactly what I was hoping to accomplish. Glad you enjoyed it!
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