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why love doesnt work

The icy cold
my last friend
my last refuge

Waiting for her
To show her face
to trust her heart

Those eyes that touched me
that warmed my soul
that softened my heart, are gone

Those hands that held me
that tore down my walls
that wiped my tears, are gone

She's left me waiting
left me alone
left me with a lifeless heart

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  • Re-invention silver member
    June 6, 2008

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    aww hun, how sad.... I;m so sorry for your heart really, Ive felt that way too...