There is no time, apparently
They say
That everything happens at once in exactly the same moment.
On a sea of parallels
Roll little wooden boats...
So why then
Do you feel so far away?
Author notes
...I was feeling sentimental
A contest entry
- Bang Bang, my baby shot me down... by Sick Sunshine.
400 points, ended November 10, 2008, 19 entries
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were is!
Desire,
Love,
Passion,
Devotion in this piece were!
Exactly not any were in here like i asked
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Yeeh..I just now realised that was a wordbank...sorry
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