Isolated from you,
Withdrawn from life.
I await your return,
To my heart.
Heavily I hold on to our dreams,
Until you return to my heart.
Encased in crystal,
Frozen it will stay.
Until then it remains,
Frozen like the world around me.
Awaiting the heat of your body,
To melt my soul away.
When you take me in your arms,
And carry my spirit upwards.
Winter's Sorrow No more.
In a list
A contest entry
- It's another SEMI-QUICKIE! (Pic Prompt) by Angelflower.
600 points, ended April 29, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you have taken this prompt and formed a master piece of emotions...the sadness held as the pain seeped into the heart...and as the winter encases the land so did the cold encase your heart...sighs...just love it!!! congrats on the bronze but should of been gold
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Oh wow! this was such a great take on the prompt!! I really liked this, and the emotions that connect this piece to the prompt is so strong! well done. Best of luck to you..
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you so much, this one I struggled for a little while on but think I found the right words to describe what I saw in the picture
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really good poem. i love it!
christina
KEEP WRITING
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Thank you for your wonderful comment.
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Very Good. It was sad but I liked how you expressed how you felt.
I loved this poem. It had warmth, feeling, and much more. Keep up the writing. I loved it. -
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Thank you for your wonderful comment.
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Very Good. It was sad but I liked how you expressed how you felt.
I liked the warmth in the poem. Very good.
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