Spinning within malevolent webs,
strands of malice
seek to complete souls conquest.
From within this decadent,
spiralling decline,
rays of hope reach out
with overtures of sacred shelter.
Cadaver,
positioned in meditative pose,
merely symbolic
of spiritual struggle.
Two forces luring the soul,
struggling to uncover
and comprehend
perfect truth.
Author notes
Pic courtesy of Darkproject.com...
http://www.darkproject.com/wallpapers/Primal.jpg
50 words (no more, no less)
In a list
A contest entry
- Dark Quicky by Unconscious-Energy by Unconscious-Energy.
450 points, ended April 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah, this rocks, Gaylene!!! I love the depth of insight into the spiritual struggle you have explored here. Superb description, creating the perfect mood for such a piece. Excellent writing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LOved it.....fantastic write good luck.
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Wonderful
Oh my what a great creation for the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow very powerful piece, superb take on the picture. All the best in the contest with it
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