Sometimes it's hard for me to express what I feel,
Feelings that could lift me up or pull me down.
But when you sit beside me,
How I feel so well and comfortable.
As I dream that you make it real,
I know our friendship has grown.
Happy I am when you are with me,
Building memories that are unbreakable.
When you're far apart how I miss you,
Longing for the day ends to see you again.
It's hard to express that I heart you,
So I wish the friendship wont end.
And if the heart ends with you,
I maybe get incomplete and insane.
So if ever the friendship ends with you,
It is better to end my life than to let friendship have an end.
Author notes
[2]~"You and me
We used to be together
Everyday together always
I really feel
That I'm losing my best friend
I can't believe
This could be the end
It looks as though you're letting go
And if it's real
Well I don't want to know"
-Don't Speak, No Doubt
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aww this is so sweet
well done and all the best for the contest -
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wow this person must b a really really great frien d fo ru to feel so strongly about them -
This is very sad. I hope you feel better. Good luck in the contest.
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AHH! the ending scared me a little. But yeah, I know you don't mean it literally right? right...?!! kay, good
hehe... yes, friendships are invaluable to me too. I have no clue what I would do without the support and understanding of certain individuals. And I think I get your saying that you'd rather not express this "love" inside for you'd rather at least save what you have. Think a lot of us have been there... so all the very best of luck in l<3ve & thank u for the sweet entry~ Alex
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thanks for your comment.. very well appreciated.. ^_^
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