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Memories

The abyss of thoughts
Dark tainted memories
Of pain filled regrets
That haunts
My dream filled nights!

A contest entry

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  • Sound of Madness
    June 10, 2008

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    I don't usually like short poems, because they normaly don't say much, but this one I can really relate to, and my mind fills in what was left out. Nice work.


  • Hihamburger
    May 27, 2008
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    Good poem. I really like it.


  • Shahrazad
    May 5, 2008

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    I liked how dark you made memories and dreams appear to be! Good imagery for the subject.

    There were a few gramatical errors but those can be easily fixed...

    Dark and Lovely- thanks for the read!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    An intense write and the emotion is portrayed in a minimum of words!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!