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speed up the roving of the boat--------------

Let the ship of love
sail smoothly on safe waters
and let it not go forlorn
or wrecked at unknown odds.

Love should never fail
in our sweet hearts
and it should continue to live long
for ever, in souls

The other shore is quite far away
and the other gender is waiting for the confluence
speed up the roving of the boat
and make it possible to reach on time

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 5, 2008
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    Beautifully worded with depth and lovely imagery. Thanks so much for your entry
    gaylene