Suffocating, tangled,
lost in twists and turns.
Flying off the hair pin curve,
of life's twisted road.
A contest entry
- Contest of the Shorts! by Shahrazad.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A lot said on only four lines..eihy very descripte feelings of what life is..WORDS ke you've chose is what makes poetry come alive!
Retrun the Favor.I wrote a simailar poem, A roller coaster..meaning life. TEll me what you think. Thanks
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Was this a response to Robert Frost's poem? Because that's all I could think of while reading this because the titles of the poems are identical. However the content is different. This was really good- I loved the bit about the "hair pin curve" Wonderful imagery... again I kept thinking about the Frost poem... which may or may not have been your intent
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A great write, many emotions in so few words. Well done. Juls
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I love this!
Very well penned!
Best wishes in the contest.
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Very intense composition with an abundance of imagery
within the 20 word limit!
Good luck to you in the contest
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