Looking the demon deep in the eyes,
what do you see?
A life full of pain and suffering.
Long ago she was abused,
Mentally and physically used.
Left bloody and discolored, forever confused.
Day in and day out
the insults would spout.
But never would she pout.
Inside she kept all her tears,
pain and anger building over the years.
But not everything is as it appears.
She had a secret she held deep inside.
One she thought she'd forever hide.
But in time her will did then subside.
A demon lived within her fragile frame.
Blood-thirsty and ready to claim
all those who had put her to shame.
All her pain and anger,
had channeled into something stronger.
The demon had been unleashed with frightening hunger.
All the bullies had disappeared.
In the end it was her they feared
as they looked deep into the eyes of the demon fully reared.
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Awsome! it very addicting
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Dark...I like your strength at the end...the demon within us is all powerful..
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DDDDDAMN that was amazing. I loved the imagery and the lyrical value of it. I could actually picture the acts, and the eyes of a demon in revenge born rage. Awesome.
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Wow that was really deep and i thought that you couldn't have done a better job because it was so well put together!
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Loved it!!
i think that the way the girl turns in power at the end is brilliant, i think this poem is perfect!! It has great rhythm and depth. Keep writing
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HOT SHT.........loves it......Cool write I loved it the whole concept and the way you used your word.........It was absolutely F-A-B-O-U-S-L-O-U-S............ the way u put everything together was so cool and the words you used flow together nicely......This has to be one of my favorite poems........... Dont ever stop writing.............................I definetly will have to check out more of your work.........very good again.........keep it up.
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wow thats good your only 17 and wrote that i like that its so good i cant even think of a word that decribes how good it is neeeeeeeeeeeevvvvvvvveeeeeeerrrrrr stop wrighting because this is wow your good
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Absolutely Amazing
It was terrific. I like the symbolism( the demon). It was a truly well written and I admire this piece. Please!!! keep writing!
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Wow
The begining just pulls you in. Then it sounds as if a story is being told. Your Rhyming is fantstic. Ever line fits perfect with each other. I love how theres a demon inside her ready to unleash anger, making everyone fear her now.
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WoW! I love it, how the girl was the weak one yet grew into the one they feared, perfect! Nice work
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Wow. Full of pain & sorrow. A young girl trapped with no way out. So sorry to hear of that. Tho it is good poem.
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Haunting with a strong sense of pain, fear and a slight undertone of anger. Thank you
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